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Ahh.. Pommu-tan this is so beautiful!! * _ *
Your new oc is completely adorable T//u//T
You have really improved a lot since I first watched you,
The colors you used her are completely mesmerizing.First of all I really like how you colored her hair <3 The green with a shade of dark purple and blue really blends well together :iconsocute-plz:
What I find somehow strange is her arms. The way they just appear out of the sleeves seems kind of awkward to me Asdfghjkl Q A Q maybe you should have colored the inner-part of the sleeve with a much darker color. And, The green thing that she's holding. It would have been better if it was a lighter and warmer color like yellow,pink or red. It would look better with the light colored background.also, I see that the green thing is emitting some kind of warm light (as seen on her right pigtail and clothes).
Her dress is very nicely made, The ribbons and the bunch of flowers look great with the dress :3
To simply put it I think your coloring skills have improved a lot :love:
The background is simple but beautiful. The stars,flowers and clouds really make this picture look warm,pretty and soft * v *
What amazes me the most is that you drew this WITH A MOUSE. asdfghjkl :iconfanboyingplz: Most of the things which I found awkward would probably be so difficult to draw with a mouse T/7/T Its really nice to see that you can make such amazing pictures by using just a mouse <3
I'D LIKE TO SAY YOU ARE IMPROVING GIRLLLL :iconhappytearsplz: I hope this critique wasn't really mean xD; I can't give very good critiques.. OTL (and please excuse any spelling mistakes ; v ;)
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pommuMoved2mintyMuk Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh Pabura, thank you so much for this critique! * v *
Yes, I actually used completely purple for the hair and then added a green highlight ;7;

Ohh the arms. Thanks for mentioning it. I was actually going to shade the inside of the sleeve darker but it seems I forgot. I'll fix it when I can XD

The green thing is actually the planet Earth, so it's completely blue with green continents. I had a feeling the glowing would be weird, but everything looked so odd when I added a cool coloured glow; like green or blue :iconwhutplz: so I just gave a red glow instead because it didn't look that bad xD

Thank you so much Pabu. I'm really glad that you took the time to critique and I will make sure to follow your tips in future * A * ♥
Pekobell Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh pommmu~ Q//A//Q Aah..Now I feel like my critique was a bit harsh > . < Anyways, Ignore a few of my 'over-exaggerated' remarks xD You are doing great ^^ I'm sure you'll improve a lot in the future ! (also, I'd like to see your tablet drawings e v e)
Ack.. I didn't think it was earth.. OTL. neither expect that your oc was so huge.. T V T
Ah anyways, I'm glad my critique could somewhat help u :iconkittyglompplz:
pommuMoved2mintyMuk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No no, it wasn't over-exaggerated at all! It would if you had mentioned that she has no nose XDD
(I don't have a tablet though :iconwhutplz: )

My OC isn't so huge XD
I just drew her like that because she's an origin of a star (long story :p ) in the form of a human.. She is space-related so that's why.
I drew her hands shaped like that and didn't know what else to draw in them xDD
Pekobell Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Amgggggggg. I didn't realize that she didn't have a nose :iconcannotevenplz:
Anyways, I know how we both are interested in space and stuff :iconfeellikeasirplz:
heheh, You should draw her in space with millions of stars and a little view of the milky way :iconslashshine:
pommuMoved2mintyMuk Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Actually, I had started a drawing with that same idea over my mid-term break (I showed you during a xD) but I haven't touched it since v
Pekobell Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
You must complete it pommu! Q//v//Q you know what?
We both should draw different space drawings~ and join them together to create a 'complete view' * Q * like a collab ;>
pommuMoved2mintyMuk Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow that sounds likr such a cool idea!! B-but... That would be hard QAQ
Pekobell Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
IKRR... T/v/T but...By drawing hard things, We'll be pro~
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